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Post by mechwarrior5 on Feb 16, 2006 12:20:39 GMT -5
I've been working on this story for quite a few months, and pretty soon it's going to be finished. Right now it's 24 chapters long, and should end at 27 or 28. I'd love it if everyone here could read and review it on the fanfiction website, but if you just read it, I'll be mighty thankful. Paid in Blood can be found here. www.fanfiction.net/s/2389317/1/ Please bear with some of the editing mistakes that are in the story, because most of them have already been brought to my attention, I am just waiting to finish the whole thing before I issue a complete version online.
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Post by cxone on Feb 16, 2006 22:08:52 GMT -5
OK . I'm stupid . I followed the link . Regestered on the board . Could not find the story .
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Feb 16, 2006 22:37:29 GMT -5
Sh*t . . . how did I put the wrong link there? Maybe I'm just the stupid one. It should be edited now. Sorry about that.
EDIT: So, evidently it wasn't my fault. fanfiction.net must be screwing up or something, because it usually doesn't do that. I changed the link to my profile page, which works.
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Feb 22, 2006 9:16:07 GMT -5
So, Paid in Blood is quickly coming to a close. After working on it for about 9 months, the end is within sight. But just because the bulk of the story is almost finished doesn't mean all of the work is almost done. This story will have to undergo several rounds of editing before I can post a final version.
The reason I am posting about it on here is because I need help editing it. It always pays to have other people read your work and comment on it, and I was hoping some of you people--people who probably know Shadowrun better than I do--could give it a look and make editing suggestions. I wouldn't expect anything to happen fast, but any detailed criticism I would appreciate. The story is going to end up being 55,000 words, so I don't expect anyone to be excited about reading and editing the whole thing, but perhaps I could split it up and have certain people do certain chapters. In all honesty, I don't know what I'm going to do yet, but if anyone would offer their help, it would be much appreciated.
I'm planning, after all the editing is finished, to do a limited publishing with cafepress.com. Shadowrun is a copyrighted trademark (as is the world it takes place in), but i won't be making any money off of it, and I won't be hawking it to anyone. I only want to offer it to friends and family and people who enjoy shadowrun as much as I do. The reason I say this is that I would send a copy to anyone who helped me with the editing process as a little thank you. I know it's kind of a paltry gift, but it's about the only thing I have to offer.
Please, if you would like to help--or request a copy of the story--respond to this post or e-mail me.
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Feb 25, 2006 22:02:24 GMT -5
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Mar 1, 2006 15:36:21 GMT -5
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Mar 6, 2006 7:31:47 GMT -5
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Mar 16, 2006 0:47:15 GMT -5
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Post by cxone on Mar 16, 2006 16:07:46 GMT -5
Couldn't read it man . Sory . I tried to e mail some of the chapters to work , I have a lot of time on back shift to read . Anyways the work system trashed my e mails , won't let it get through .
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Post by mechwarrior5 on Mar 16, 2006 18:24:05 GMT -5
would it help if I sent you some of the chapters as web files or something? and I guess you don't have internet at said work place, do you?
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